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It would of been nice,
wouldn't it?
It would of been great,
WOULDN'T IT?

If i wasn't screaming, yelling, kicking
It would of been nice, wouldn't it?

If I wasn't storming, crying, choking
It would of been great, wouldn't it?

(chorus)
You dirty bastard!
Back into your answers,
My saying in this was shit!
And my mind can not lay no more
in this silent godforsaken pit!

I remember...
the burning amber
and the gleam in those eyes,
perfect artist for those lies
and perfect targets for needles collide

(chorus)
You dirty bastard!
Back into your answers,
My saying in this was shit!
And my mind can not lay no more
in this silent godforsaken pit!

Unresting nights, Insomnia fights
Dreams and nightmares destroyed
Dreamares substained and heart-full rythmes

I remember i pictured
The knife that slit through skins and nerves
And my lips flowing the lost voice
Saying
How does it feel?
HOW DOES IT FEEL?!
(music stops)
Having something long and hard hurting you?

(chorus)
You dirty bastard!
Back into your answers,
My saying in this was shit!
And my mind can not lay no more
in this silent godforsaken pit!
(repeat until head can't take it no more)



Note, i keep hearin a sort of rock metal song, a really deep, quick, scream-loaded, drum intense one
©2006-2010 ~N0cturnalMist
:iconn0cturnalmist:

Author's Comments

I read a poem on DA last night, and i strongly believe it blew me apart.
I've always hated talking bout my deeper emotions, and reading that poem..just seemed..to have triggered something of a sort.
I'm not quite sure, but i felt a need to slip in a bit of theese emotions on paper.
It kinda felt good.
Really good.

Guess i owe big thx to that deviant xoxox


It's a song, the lyrics and the rythm just kept on ringing in my head when i wrote this.

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